Hello ,
Annabel here
This week we have been learning about procedural writing . Procedural writing is to give instructions and inform about how to do something. we had to write instructions on how to make a burger with different types of ingredients. Have you made a burger before ?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi there Annabel,
ReplyDeleteWhat a tasty thing to blog about! I have made a burger before, I would say they are one of my favorite meals!
I enjoyed reading your burger instructions, they made me quite hungry! Just a wee comment on grammar, could you re-phrase your sentence that says "we had to do instruct how to make a burger..." to "we had to write instructions on how to make a burger" or something similar? That might make your sentence flow a bit more easily.
Great job, I know what I'm having for dinner tonight!
Hi Mr Unwin,
DeleteI was looking through my blog comments and a saw your comment and it really made my day. And thank you for the advice it really helped, I hope your burger was yummy.